Writers, please come to the Nancy Simpson Celebration is a show of support for all that Nancy did for the writing community in Western North Carolina, and beyond. It is at the John C. Campbell Folk School, Brasstown, NC, in the Keith house in the Community Room, at 2:00 PM, Saturday, May 5, 2018. Here is the link for the event:
https://netwestwriters.blogspot.com/p/celebrating-nancy-simpson.html
https://www.folkschool.org/
Writers and poets in the far western mountain area of North Carolina and bordering counties of South Carolina, Georgia and Tennessee post announcements, original work and articles on the craft of writing.
Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Tuesday, April 24, 2018
Should we rid our work of all adverbs? Only the bad ones.
This is part of a blog post that I found especially interesting. I pound this advice into my students in every class. We all make these mistakes without realizing it. Kristen's post is a valuable one to keep handy and read often. http://authorkristenlamb.com/2018/04/self-editing-writers/
Her writing is humorous but dead on topic. I subscribe to her blog and am never disappointed in what she has to say about writing. In this post: Self-Editing:7 tips to Tighten the Story and Cut Costs, we learn how to self-edit and save money on hiring editors to do what we can do ourselves.
I am offering you just one of her tips here.
Her writing is humorous but dead on topic. I subscribe to her blog and am never disappointed in what she has to say about writing. In this post: Self-Editing:7 tips to Tighten the Story and Cut Costs, we learn how to self-edit and save money on hiring editors to do what we can do ourselves.
I am offering you just one of her tips here.
#1 DIY Adverb Removal
Despite what you might have been told, not ALL
adverbs are evil. Redundant adverbs are evil. If someone shouts loudly?
How else are they going to shout? Whispering quietly?
***Wow, glad the author explained how
'whispering' works.
Ah, but if a character whispers seductively?
The adverb seductively gives us a quality to the whisper that
isn't inherent in the verb. Check your work for adverbs and kill the
redundant ones.
Either we need to choose a stronger verb, or
we're treating the reader like an idiot.
If a character walks quickly to the
train platform, then choose a verb that means 'to walk quickly' (stride, jog,
hurry) and use that one instead. If a character yells loudly, ditch
the loudly.
We understand how yelling 'works.'
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Kristen Lamb,
self-editing
Monday, April 23, 2018
Send in your poems - deadline is April 30.
Here is a poetry contest our member poets can enter and possibly win a prize.
The North Carolina Literary Review is giving nice prizes to the winners. Check it out.
http://www.nclr.ecu.edu/submissions/applewhite-guidelines.html
The North Carolina Literary Review is giving nice prizes to the winners. Check it out.
http://www.nclr.ecu.edu/submissions/applewhite-guidelines.html
James Applewhite Poetry Prize
the 2018 competition final judge will be Amber flora Thomas
First Prize $250 and publication in nclr
Finalists will also be considered for publication in NCLR and NCLR Online.
NCLR considers poetry submissions only through the James Applewhite Poetry Prize competition. New submission period: March 15 through April 30.
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