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Sunday, February 8, 2009

My Father, the farmer, lover of the Land

This poem is one I've written and rewritten, changed titles and almost discarded. But I have kept it and I'll share it today. The farmer is my late father who'd rather plant and grow than eat the fruit of his labors.

Farmer and His Dog

Once he cultivated vast acres, harvested bounteous crops.
Grey haired now, in a frayed lawn chair,
sweat staining his chambray shirt, pock-marked
with burn holes from his Pall Malls, he caresses
silky ears of Pat, his bulldog.

His stooped frame rests from a morning spent
spraying tomatoes, trying to murder small bugs
that battle him for his harvest.

Tall corn tassels. Green beans climb twine
strung on poles in rows equally distanced.
Piles of summer squash strewn on clean straw
hide under leaves large as sun hats.

The cigarette ash grows long. He hardly notices
the shortened smoke, the fire against his calluses.

9 comments:

  1. Lovely poem! Clear as looking at a photograph, subtle as meeting the man on his own front porch. Thank you.

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  2. What a beautiful piece ... and a lovely tribute to your father! This was so VISUAL ... like I was there, smelling the earth and waiting for him to tap off the ash!!

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  3. Glenda, I liked this poem before. It is a vivid portrait. It is
    emotion-packed.

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  4. Thanks, Joan, Lynn and Nancy for your comments.
    I'm glad I kept this poem and continued to work on it. And I'm glad you all appreciated it.
    Glenda

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  5. Glenda-I loved it! I've been wanting to feature you on the Blind Pig-I think this might be a good choice-if you do?

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  6. Glenda,

    I love this poem. It brings back so many wonderful memories of my father. Thanks for sharing this heart-warming poem with us.

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  7. Yes, this is a keeper! I agree with the comments made already: It's a lovely and vivid poem.

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  8. Thanks, everyone. Your words are so supportive and I appreciae them.
    Tipper you may use this poem if you wish and I'd be honored to be on your blog.

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  9. Oh Glenda, in four verses you have painted a vivid, 3-D epic, panorama of your father's life—his love of family and the land, the passions of his soul and his values. I could see, taste and smell the toil and determination of a life well lived. Like your father, you were determined and you toiled to distilled this to the perfect essence.

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