Wednesday, June 18, 2008

YOUR POETRY: LET'S HEAR IT

Nancy Simpson is teaching a special poetry writing class at John C. Campbell Folk School July 26 - August 1, 2008.

YOUR POETRY: LET'S HEAR IT.

The focus is how sound is made in free verse poetry. It will be especially helpful to you in the writing of narrative poems and mediative poems. Poetry must be pleasing to the ear, so no matter how free we believe Free Verse is, poetry cannot sound like prose. Learn specific sound related techniques.

How and where to publish will be discussed. A list of markets will be given.

Bring you poetry project and get feedback from the instrctor.

YOUR POETRY : LET'S HEAR IT will be held in the new writing studio at Orchard House and Harvest Room. The new computer lab makes it possible to complete more work than before. Each student has his/her own writing space. Sorry, the class is limited to eight students. Pre register now if you are interested, to be sure to reserve a place. The fee of $430.00 can be cut in half to $215.00 if you live in the folk school area and if you get your name on the list in time. John C. Campbell Folk School,
Brasstown, N.C. 1 800 FOLK-SCH. http://www.folkschool.org/

Monday, June 16, 2008

Thank you, Hendersonville Writers. It was fun meeting many of the Netwest members I've been conversing with by email. Thanks also to Nancy Purcell from Brevard, JC Walkup and John Malone from Haywood county, Gary Carden from Jackson County and Bob Greenwald from Henderson county who shared with our guests.
Today was a good day, not only for me and for NCWN and Netwest, but I know the writers who came, connected with other local writers will find their lives enriched in the future.
As writers we all need community. We need to talk with other writers, share with other writers and bounce ideas off each other. I see the writers in Henderson county coming together in future writing events. Netwest will be there to help make this possible.

Saturday, June 14, 2008

WRITING FREE VERSE; SOME QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS

WRITING FREE VERSE POETRY: Some Questions and Answers

Nancy Simpson, Instructor

When talking with free verse poets, I tread lightly to see if we are on the same page. Many free verse poets believe there is no form in free verse poetry and that there are no rules. I do not agree with that. I believe writers of free verse must follow the essential rules of poetry. Free verse poets have a great amount of freedom, but it is a misconception to think we can write with abandon of rules.

Yes, we must break with traditional verse. We must shun rhyme, but after that, in my opinion, free verse poets must decide carefully which guidelines of poetry they will practice.

Some of the most asked questions from my students.

1) QUESTION: If there are free verse rules, what is number one?

ANSWER: Economy of Words is the first rule of poetry. The second is Use of Diction, choice of words, choosing the best word in regard to correctness. Poets of old followed these essential rules. Free verse poets must follow these rules.

2) QUESTION: Do I have to write in sentences?

ANSWER: Yes. According to the Princeton Encyclopedia of Poetics, poetry is written in sentences and lines. Poets of old followed this guideline. Free verse poets must do so. Why? Syntax of Sentence. A sentence has syntax, and it is syntax that gives your words meaning. No meaning, no understanding for your reader.


3) QUESTION: Do I have to punctuate?

ANSWER: No. This is your choice. Once in a while, in the literary magazines, I read poems that has no punctuation. However, it is as if the poem were punctuated and then the poet lifted out the punctuation marks. There is no rule, but caution would say, help the reader all you can. If there were a rule regarding punctuation, it would be: Do not lose your reader.

4) QUESTION: What is the rule for line breaks?

ANSWER: There is no rule. Line breaks are completely your responsibility and your choice. Some free verse poets work in unrhymed meter, some count syllables, some spoon feed the reader one thought on one line and the next bite on the next line. There are no rules, but there are a few guidelines.
A.) End the line with a strong word, not a weak word such as a, and, or the.

B.) Be aware of your one word lines. That one word you want to use will draw attention to itself. It had better be great, for it will provoke questions, and it will slow your reader.

C.) If your line is too wide for a narrow page, it will wrap, and you will lose what ever it was you were trying to accomplish. Editors shun the wide line that wants to wrap.

D.) If there were one rule to line breaks, it would be, work your lines.

5) QUESTION: What if I have a sentence that ends in the middle of the next line? What is the rule?

ANSWER: There is no rule against ending a sentence in the middle of a line. What you have is a caesura, a pause, and you have a golden opportunity. Caesura in a line can be a dreadful mistake, or it can be one of the most brilliant, most sophisticated moves in your free verse poetry. The guideline would be, make that line with the caesura stand alone as a thought. It is comparable to giving your reader a spoonful of something delicious that was not on the menu. You have the first sentence and the second sentence, and in-between you have a line with a period somewhere in it. Words on each side of the period should add up to something in itself. Guard against caesura lines that make no sense.

Post any questions or comments to www.netwestwriters.blogspot.com

Nancy Simpson is the author of two collections of poetry.
She is Resident Writer at John C. Campbell Folk School.

Friday, June 13, 2008

Assimilation
By Jim Cox

From the west side of crooked creek
You can see long stretches of meadowland
Past the narrow waterway, abruptly ending
At the steep ascent of hills covered in white pine

Along the banks mole tunnels make the soft
Soil lumpy, turtles rest beneath the tangled
Vines and foliage of dozens of plant species,
Some so rare they make you laugh

Early mornings when I walk the gravel road
Cut in for the campground near the creek
A great blue heron rises from her nest
Flying to the topmost branches of a hickory

She watches me go by and then returns
To the thicket grown dense on a shallow bend
Such is the joy of the morning: What grave
Trials can alter the peace of this land?

On the east side of the creek the chainsaws
Topple trees; the big machines’ backward beeps
Signal the change – fairways eight and nine
Will line that side right up to water’s edge

The new golf course by the Eastern Band of Cherokees
Will bring the fat rich tourists to the mountains
Empty their pockets as empty as their eyes
A right recompense given the tribe’s history

Now the Indians can truly say, “I know the cold
Hand that hides the anguish in your heart;
Because of that my eyes have lost their glimmer,
Their stars dying, my vision grows dimmer.

I have been these four hundred years and more
Taking in the white man’s way, I know the tongue,
The fear and arrogance that has gone beyond
The awareness of respect or redemption.”

Still, the moles are driven from their homes,
Two wounded ones that crawled out to cross
To safety lie dead at my feet, the turtle’s cracked back
Suffers the sun, the great blue heron gone.

Tuesday, June 10, 2008


Brenda Kay Ledford's latest poetry chapbook, SACRED FIRE, will be printed by Finishing Line Press in September. You may go to http://www.finishinglinepress.com/, click on "New Releases" to pre-order the book.
Brenda Kay's first two chapbooks won awards from the Paul Green Foundation.



Reading at JCCFS is FOURTH Thursday this month







POETS AND WRITERS READING POEMS AND STORIES AT JOHN C. CAMPBELL FOLK SCHOOL, BRASSTOWN, NORTH CAROLINA
Glenda Barrett of Hiawassee, Georgia and Robert Kimsey of Mc Caysville, Georgia will be reading original works in the Keith House, June 26 at 7:00 P.M. The event is sponsored by Netwest and the community is invited for an hour of original poetry and prose.
Glenda Barrett is not only an artist of brush and paint, but a literary artist
as well. Glenda sold the first essay she ever submitted, and her work has appeared in Woman's World, rural Heritage, Kaleidoscope, Farm and Ranch Living, Muscadine Lines and numerous other magazines and journals.

Her chapbook “When the Sap Rises," published by Finishing Line Press became available this past April. Glenda is a “home grown girl,” born and raised in Hiawassee. Her writings are humorous, heartfelt, nostalgic and pure magic.

Robert Kimsey’s writing provokes deep feelings and is often colored by the past of Eastern Kentucky where he was born. He is the winner of the Lee Pennington Award, the R. J. Lutske Memorial Award and placed second in 2005 in the President’s Prize of the Kentucky State Poetry Society’s contest. He is author of chapbooks, “Paths From the Shawnee Spring” and a limited edition “Readings”. Robert spends much of his time volunteering and teaching writing to children in the Fannin County schools. The following was published in Southern Ocean Review.


FAMILY PICTURES
I see them standing side by side,
the walls separating them invisible
yet as strong as an oak door.
Not touching and never a kiss or
smile between them, only
outward to the camera -to the world.
Those who would speak have long
since passed.

There are no concrete stories,
only ghosts that linger on the paper
Pictures do not tell it all,
just smiles and pressed suits.
None of hands soiled with earth
or blood of Sunday chickens.
None of sideways glances,
full of mistrust and hurt.

Now only time knows.
The paper holds the shadows
until the light burns them away.


This evening will be a delight for anyone who enjoys poetry and good writing. Both Netwest members are also excellent readers who will hold your interest so tightly you will be surprised and sorry when the hour has ended. Take their books home with you and you will be able to continue to enjoy their words long after this night is over.

Monday, June 9, 2008

Comments on Writers Talking All Day About Writing

"Great workshop. Fun, and I learned some good tips. Carol (Crawford)puts on a good workshop." Shirley Uphouse, former Program Coordinator for Netwest

"A lot of my confusion over how to go about putting a chapbook together was cleared up in our group, and I did my best to take copious notes before and after lunch. All of us really got a lot out of it, and got to know each other better. It's been a long time since I've written any new poetry, but I'm inspired to try to find a time and place that's conducive to writing". Carole Thompson

"Great Workshop, Glenda! I enjoyed every minute of it (Nancy is great!) and I met some interesting new writers! What a wonderful event! Hey, we don’t have to import good teachers." Janice Moore

I met wonderful people who write fabulous poetry. Nancy Simpson is passionate about helping poets get published, and she willingly shares her wisdom. I left the workshop inspired, with my head full of ideas for improving my poems and writing new ones!" Karen Holmes from Atlanta

This workshop was wonderful. Carol Crawford presented a well-balanced and structured class. The writing exercises were not only fun but an excellent learning tool. At the breaks, we commented on the excitement of learning and being offer something new at each event. The day flew by. The greatest benefit is the stimulation you feel at the end of the class. All you want to do is get home and start writing. Truly it was a wonderful day. My only regret was that I had to select one class with the offer of two great teachers. Thats life. Carol McAfee, winner in the Cherokee County Silver Arts competition, 2008
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Sunday, June 8, 2008

Netwest member, Robert Greenwald has new book

Robert Greenwald''s book, Conflict Without Chaos...A Look Back at Conflict Intervention Initiatives During the Nation's Early Civil Rights Era, was released in April, 2008. See information below. Congratulations, Robert.

Publisher: Hampton Press, Cresskill, NJISBN Paperbound: 978-1-57273-765-5; Price: $27.95ISBN Hardbound: 978=1=57273- 764-8; Price: $67.50
Genres: Nonfiction (conflict resolution, civil rights, historical, memoir)

Mediation, alternative dispute resolution, and civil rights protest have become familiar terms in the lexicon of contemporary human behavior.
This book carries the reader back to some of the early applications of those processes. It is a first-hand account of the turbulent late nineteen sixties, and through the seventies, when minority dissent threatened to widen the racial divide, rendering many communities subject to violent protest and instability. It was a time when new national legislation to bring about more equal sharing of opportunity led to substantial pressures on the legal system. The federal courts were overburdened with petitions for redress of grievances claiming denial of citizen rights guarantees. They were open to considering ways to relieve their dockets of unprecedented congestion.

The idea of ordering "voluntary" mediation as an alternative to litigation began to assert its appeal to the judiciary. The process became particularly prevalent in connection with law suits filed to overcome school desegregation, alleged abusive police practices, complaints of inhumane or unconstitutional conditions of incarceration by prison inmates, and a variety of other issues being tested under the Civil Rights Act of 1964. No longer was mediation largely limited to the settlement of labor-management disputes. A new professional genus was born--the neutral third-party intervenor trained to bring community and institutional conflict parties to the negotiation table.


The author spent a total of 22 years in federal service, much of it as regional mediator with the Community Relations Service, an arm of the U.S. Department of Justice. Prior experience included three years of military service during World War II, some dozen earlier career years in chamber of commerce management positions in Texas and Oklahoma, and later as a senior administrator for a social service agency in Dallas, Texas.

Born in Jamaica, New York, he is a graduate of the George Washington University with a degree in government.For further information, readers are invited to visit the author's web site: http://www.Conflictwithoutchaos.com Expedited purchase from the publisher can be made by calling toll-free at 800-894-8955. Other availability, sometimes limited, from www.Amazon.com by special order from your favorite local bookseller..

Saturday, June 7, 2008

Stephen King Quote

We had a terrific workshop in Blairsville, GA today with some very talented people. Thanks to Carol Crawford and Nancy Simpson for their instruction and to Carole Thompson and all those who helped with cleanup.

I think Stephen King says it best, Writers.

"Talent is cheaper than table salt. What separates the talented individual from the successful one is a lot of hard work."
Stephen King

Jayne Jaudon Ferrer, S.C. member



Those of you close to Greenville, SC, are invited to come meet Jayne Jaudon Ferrer on Saturday, June 21st, at 8 PM, at Greenville's newest bookstore, As the Page Turns, a longtime dream-come-true for Lisa Nichols. Kay Day will be there, along with several other terrific Southern female poets. It will be a "midsummer night's dream," for sure!


Check our archives for an early post by Jayne with her view of poets and poetry today.

Her Website: www.jaynejaudonferrer.com

Jayne's Blog: http://commagoddess.blogspot.com



Dana Wildsmith, poet

Dana Wildsmith is my new favorite poet. She grew up in the same hot, humid area of south Georgia where I lived. I like the following poem, Peopleing, which Dana gave me permisssion to post on our blog.

Peopling

Our border collie Max, I say, would be a bow-tie guy,
a grey slacks with cuffs kind of guy,
his solid-color long-sleeved shirts always lightly starched.
For casual, he’d keep pressed khakis on wooden hangers
and white golf shirts with left-sleeve monogram.

Fred the red hound would live in faded 501’s
and Carhartts, Dixie Outfitter shirts, and ball caps
promo-ing beer and football and backhoes.

We’re sure Max is a Whiskey-Palian,
20-year deacon, high church, early Mass.
Fred’s kin have been Baptists, by God,
since time began on Sunday, October 23rd, 4004 B.C.

Sndays after church, Fred eats Mama’s fried chicken
and watches the game. Max does the buffet at the Club,
drives his white Volvo home and now politely corrects us,
“You have me all wrong, you know.”
But he won’t say how.

Fred’s F-150’s spinning gravel out front
and he yells he’ll catch us later--
gotta get that squirrel before it makes it to a tree.

So we sit on the porch with Molly,
the damaged black Lab. She was a preacher’s kid,
never heard a cuss word till high school,
believed in the goodness of man
until one man beat that guilelessness out of her.
Now Molly slips around the edges of her days
not looking at the world so the world won’t exist.

But even Molly’s pleased when Barney, the old beagle,
comes bowlegging over to find out what’s new with us.
He’s got time to palaver, now he’s retired from the mill.
He hitches his overalls at the knees
and eases to a rocker, informing us that
whoo, lordy—it’s going to be a hot one today.

Later this evening he’ll have his coffee
at Waffle House with Roscoe and Willie,
and he’ll tell the other dogs how he talked to me earlier
and don’t they think I’d be an Irish Setter?
Not a prissy bred-for-show, mind you,
but one of those country Setters, always up for a walk….

Friday, June 6, 2008

A PC must be strong, in more ways than one.


The job description for Program Coordinator should not include heavy lifting. Today Carole and Norm Thompson, my husband Barry(on right) and I set up the venue for our workshop tomorrow. By that, I mean we dragged and lifted heavy eight foot tables and unloaded chairs from a trailer. I won't say how old we four are, but I can tell you that an hour of this work wore us out.
I made the decision tonight that if this job requires that kind of physical labor in the future, I will definitely have to resign! I also made the decision not to depend on my caring helpful husband to always be there for Netwest. Some have declared him an honorary member of NCWN West. Barry, who is a good photographer, takes many photos of our members and at our events. He has gone far beyond his duties as a supportive husband to make sure my Netwest obligations are met. I can't thank him enough.
So, I will be calling on more of our members for help in the future. Hopefully some strong members who can lift and drag.
Thanks so much to Carole and Norm for all their help with Writers Talking All Day About Writing. Carole, our newest Netwest Rep got her feet wet in a hurry. We look forward to a delightful day in Blairsville tomorrow.






Tuesday, June 3, 2008

New Georgia Rep for Netwest


My name is Carole Thompson. I am pleased to be a member of the North Carolina Writers Network. My husband, Norm, and I moved to Blairsville, GA 18 years ago. Prior to that, we lived on St. Simons Island for 10 years, moving there after he retired as a career pilot in the US Air Force.
Network West Coordinator, Glenda Beall, asked me about becoming one of her GA Representatives. Glenda devotes so much of her own time working hard promoting programs and literary opportunities for writers in our area. I have accepted this opportunity to be of some assistance to her and her other representatives, as we work toward the goals laid down for this Network West chapter.

. Glenda thought I might tell you something about myself. If you were to ask me, “Who are you?” my first answer would have to be:”I am a wife, a mother of four children, a grandmother of five and great-grandmother of two.” Norm and I are celebrating our 56th anniversary this month. We wanted to do something special, so we’re visiting friends in England and then we’re all taking that train that zips under the English Channel and pops up somewhere near Paris! This is going to be a great adventure. I’m happy pursuing many interests right around my home, too. Most of my adult life I have worked in oil painting, particularly portraits. I also love to read, quilt and do crossword puzzles. Norm and I sing in the Mountain Community Chorus, and in our own church choir.

About 8 years ago, a friend invited me to take a writing class with her at Tri-County College in Murphy, N.C. I became a student in one of Nancy Simpson’s poetry classes. She totally liberated me by explaining the concept of free verse. I hung on her every word. In her next class, she pulled stories out of me like a painless dentist. The next year one of my poems was published in an anthology. After that, I submitted a short Christmas story to a well known Catholic magazine, and nearly had a heart attack when they bought it. Nancy Simpson was the first one I called. She continues to be my mentor and friend. Network West has so many wonderful, talented members!

First Place Winner In Netwest Contest



The Three-Legged Horse
by Jerry Hobbs

“Missus McGorkal, that new boy is a rotten liar. He’s been telling everybody his grandfather gave him a three-legged horse.”
“Now Sally Ruth, you know it isn’t nice to call anyone a liar.”
“But he is, Missus McGorkal. He told Jimmy Beesinger out by the swings yesterday, and I heard him. I asked my daddy, and he says Mr. Lampsayer is a rancher and wouldn’t keep a horse around if it had only three legs.”
After cleaning the chalkboard, Meldeen began to copy math problems from a sheet of paper. She said, “What your father told you is true, Sally Ruth. Still, it isn’t right to call anyone names, even if they do sometimes tell stories. Remember when I explained to the class how Billy Ray’s parents were killed over in Oregon? He’s just trying too hard to make new friends since moving here to his grandparents’ ranch.”
The little girl stamped her pink sneaker on the floor. “I don’t care. Besides he said it again today, and that makes him a…”
Meldeen turned from the chalkboard. “Listen, I don’t want to tell you again. Maybe you should go back outside before recess ends.”
About that time the school bell interrupted their conversation.
“Never mind. You take your seat now and let me deal with Billy Ray’s…well, let’s just call it his overactive imagination.”
“Yes, Missus McGorkal, if you say so.”

As she drove out the following Saturday morning to the Lampsayers’ ranch where Billy Ray lived, Meldeen McGorkal wondered how anyone could help but fall in love with the beauty of Montana on a day like this. The never-ending blue sky stretched like a blank canvas as far as she could see. Turning off the main road, she passed through a wide gate and couldn’t help but notice how much time and effort was spent to keep the Double Bar-L ranch in good condition, especially considering the advanced age of the owners. She dreaded her mission here, but felt Billy Ray’s grandparents needed to know that he was getting off to a bad start with his new classmates, telling tall tales.
A cheerful, gray-haired woman answered the door. “Look here who came calling, Arnold. It’s Billy Ray’s teacher. What brings you all the way out from town on a Saturday, Missus McGorkal?” The elderly lady held open the door and invited Meldeen inside.
“Come in – come in. Can I offer you a cup of coffee?”
“Good morning, Mrs. Lampsayer, Mr. Lampsayer. Thanks, but I’ve already had breakfast.” Meldeen paused and took a deep breath. “I’ve come to discuss your grandson, and please, call me Meldeen.”
“All right, Meldeen. You’re here about Billy Ray? Such a sweet boy. We just love him to pieces. He came to live with us after Tilly and Jimbo…after they…they…” Her smiling face crumpled as she remembered the accident. She ran from the room, sobbing.
Arnold apologized, “I’m sorry, ma’am. My wife still hasn’t gotten over the tragic way our daughter and her husband died.” He took a red bandana from his pocket and wiped his eyes, then blew his nose. After clearing his throat a couple of times, he said, “What say we take a walk outside while Connie gets herself back together. I’m not much for talking, but I can show you around the place while we wait for her to rejoin us.”
The two of them strolled through the yard in relative silence, broken now and then by his brief, though glowing, explanations about the beautiful flowers and shrubs. He was quick to point out that their very existence and excellent condition were due entirely to the efforts of his wife.
They were nearing the barn when she suddenly noticed an old sawhorse leaning against a fence post. Her eyes widened as she realized it was missing a leg. It seemed strangely out of place when everything else was so neat and orderly. She started to go over for a closer look when Connie came out and joined them, wiping her eyes and apologizing for her behavior.
“Please, there’s no need to explain, Mrs. Lampsayer. Even though I’ve never married, and I’ve never lost a child, I do know what it feels like to experience the tragic death of a loved one.”
“Well now, I’m sure you didn’t come all this way to watch me snivel. You mentioned earlier that you wanted to discuss Billy Ray? He’s such a bright boy, and I’m sure he’s had plenty of time to catch up with the other students in your class by now.”
“Yes he has, but that’s not the problem.”
“Problem?” asked the couple at the same time.
“Look, this is very difficult, but one of his classmates came to me yesterday with some disturbing news. It seems your grandson might be trying too hard to win acceptance and make new friends.”
Arnold spoke up. “No offense intended ma’am, but that’s just the boy’s nature. Why, our little Billy Ray’s got a heart big as all of Montana and twice as tall.”
“That’s right, Arnold. Surely that can’t be the problem she’s talking about. Meldeen, exactly what did he…?”
“Excuse me,” the teacher said, “but do I hear someone singing in the barn? Isn’t that Billy Ray?” When the older couple smiled and nodded, Meldeen murmured, “How lovely.”
Connie said, “Isn’t it though? The boy sings like an angel, that’s for sure. We decided he gets…got that talent from his father.” She forced a laugh. “Our side of the family doesn’t have enough musical ability to stick in a prairie dog’s eye, I’m afraid.”
“But who’s he singing to? Is someone with him?”
“Just Spider,” Arnold said. “He goes out to the barn every day and sings to her – morning and evening on school days and more often on weekends. He’s done that ever since he came here. It seems to make him feel better.”
“Spider?” Meldeen shivered. “He sings to a spider?”
Connie laughed again, “Oh my, no – Spider’s a mare. Used to belong to Tilly before she got married and moved to Oregon. Sixteen years old now and blind as a bat. We should have put her down years ago but simply never had the heart.”
“Good thing, too,” added Arnold. Billy Ray wouldn’t be alive today if not for her.”
“Really? Gracious, what happened?”
“It was one morning, shortly after his parents were…after he came to live with us. The boy had gone into the barn to sing, just like he always did, but that day Spider was acting strangely. Billy Ray said afterwards it was probably the shadows in her stall that kept him from seeing it.”
“From seeing what?”
“The rattlesnake. Biggest diamondback I’ve ever seen. Anyway, the closer Billy Ray got to the stall, the more old Spider danced around. She was going strictly by sound, of course, since she couldn’t see. Stomped that snake plumb dead, she did.”
“Oh my. How lucky for Billy Ray.”
Connie spoke up, “But not so lucky for Spider, I’m afraid. Poor thing almost died. As it turned out, she was sick for weeks.”
“I’ll say,” Arnold added. “Doc Vitters said it bit her four times. The only thing that saved that horse was a freak blood clot from poor circulation. It helped keep the venom isolated.”
“She certainly sounds like a brave horse.”
“The bravest I’ve ever known, and you can take that to the bank. Why, we wouldn’t trade a dozen thoroughbreds for the old girl now. Connie and I still believe the only thing that keeps her alive is how much she looks forward to Billy Ray’s singing every day. That and the care he gives her, what with feeding, combing, cleaning out her stall and the like. We think it’s good for the boy to have that responsibility, too.”
“Yes, and it must be wonderful for him to have his very own horse to ride.”
Connie glanced at her husband, then back at Meldeen. “Ride? Oh, I’m afraid not. The poor thing is confined to that sling contraption that Doc Vitters rigged up after he had to amputate her leg. Now, what were you saying about our grandson’s problem at school, my dear?”
Jerry Hobbs lives in Murphy NC and is Cherokee County Representative for Netwest. His books can be ordered from www.lulu.com . Search under his name.

Sunday, June 1, 2008

Gary Carden Muses on Mountain Changes


FEW RANDOM EVENTS

Plagued by insomnia, I got up around 6:00 one morning last week and went out to sit on my deck so I could watch the fog rise in my garden. In the dim light, I saw two young foxes playing in the freshly plowed dirt.They reminded me of kittens as they tumbled, wrestled and rolled in mock combat. Then, a plank in my deck creaked under my foot and they froze. They stared at me for an instant and then vanished, melting into the fog and undergrowth.
For a moment, I felt very privileged … even honored, you could say. Last year, while I was visiting a friend on the ridge behind Wal-mart, I came on a flock of wild turkeys standing quietly in a large grassy field. As they moved slowly across the field finally vanishing into the woods, I noted that in the background I could see clouds of dust, and I dimly heard the grind and thunder of bulldozers that were altering the shape of land along#107, converting meadows and farmland into acres ofconcrete. I asked my friend about the turkeys.
“They have no place to go,” she said. “This ridge is completely surrounded by development.”
Recently, another friend of mine told me that he had been vainly searching for “the smoke hole” in the Tuckaseigee community. “It used to be a kind of tourist attraction forty years ago.” He wondered if perhaps it had been bulldozed out of existence and that troubled him.
“You know, it was sacred to the Cherokees who believed that the smoke rising from the hole had curative powers. They said that the smoke came from an underground townhouse belonging to the Nunnihi, the immortal ones who are “protective spirits” of the Cherokees.”
He went on to note that in the old Cherokee myths, hunters who stood near the smoke hole in winter when the warm air melted the snow for a distance of five feet around the hole – those hunters claimed they heard drum beats and distant laughter.
“So, to stand there was to stand on the boundary of two different worlds – the temporal and the immortal.” Finally, he said, “I don’t think you can destroy places like that without paying for it.”
Just across the road, my neighbor has erected a huge sign that announces the sale of 34 acres of land. Who will buy it? What will they do with it? How will it affect my life? Two years from now, will I recognize the ridgeline of the woods across the road, or will it be transformed into condos, summer homes and convenience stores? Will the smell of honeysuckle and the trill of birds be replaced with the aroma of charred meat and the din of traffic?
Sitting on my deck, watching the shift of light from night to day, I have the definite feeling that we are all – foxes, wild turkeys and my neighbors – standing on the boundary between two worlds…. And we are facing eviction. Where will we go?

An Award and a Story by Peg Russell


The Award:
Great news from Oceanview!
We are pleased to announce that four Oceanview titles are among the winners of the 2008 National Indie Excellence Awards, a prestigious national awards program recognizing excellence in independent publishing.
Among this year’s winners are:
Stuff to Die For by Don Bruns – Winner, Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Category
Egrets to the Flames by Barbara Anton – Winner, General Fiction Category
The Castro Gene by Todd Buchholz – Award-winning Finalist, Mystery/ Suspense/Thriller Category
Ladykiller by Lawrence Light and Meredith Anthony –Award-winning Finalist, Mystery/Suspense/ Thriller Category
When we founded Oceanview in 2005, we endeavored to create a tradition of excellence in independent publishing and we are both humbled and proud to have four of our titles among the winners of the 2008 National Indie Excellence Awards.
Congratulations to all of this year’s winners! Oceanview Publishing Where great books are always on the horizon


And now the story:
Barbara Anton was one of my writing group, the Hotsies. She had written a novel, and sent it around, but it got nowhere. One reply said there was no market for a book about sugar cane growing in the Everglades. She put it in a drawer and left it there.
Barbara wrote many published articles, her plays were performed off, off Broadway, she, who had no college degree, was teaching writing at USF New College.
When we would mention her novel, she shrugged it off, declaring she wasn't going to work on it any more.
Another writer mentioned Barbara's novel to her publisher, who requested a copy and over a lunch, Barbara signed the contract.
Then our editor Hotsie told Barbara that she must see a doctor, she looked terrible. Pancreatic cancer took her within a month of the diagnosis. She died with two Hotsies holding her hand and stroking her hair.
Her memorial service was at Florida Studio Theatre, and included actors readings and Hotsie singing the song she wrote, Proud to be an American.
Barbara's novel was published after her death.






Peg Russell is a member of Netwest and lives in Murphy, NC. Before she came to the mountains she was an active member of the Sarasota Fiction Writers, the Hotsies writing group, Selby Poets, and led a Summer Light Verse Workshop every year.
She was commissioned to write a booklet for the Sarasota Historical Society, Dreamers of Our Past, and she co-authored a Beginning Genealogy booklet for Selby Public Library. Her poetry and light verse have been published in the Florida English Journal, Robert Wallace's Light Years, The Tampa Tribune, and the DogGone Good Times. Her features and interviews have been published in the The Sarasota Herald Tribune, Peppertree Literary Magazine, and the Cherokee Scout. Reminisce Magazine bought one of her articles. Her one act play, Kate Howe, had a public reading during the Fogarty Cafe Summer Festival, and her short play, Star Spangled Duo, was a winner in the Florida Studio Theatre Summer Shorts contest. Now a full time resident of Murphy, she is active in Richard Argo's Prose Critique Group and Friends of Murphy Library Writers Workshop.


The Price of Fame

Some writers just can't be pleased, it seems. The following from Poets and Writers, is one example.

Doris Lessing, winner of the 2007 Nobel Prize in Literature, has added to her collection of controversial sound bites, telling the BBC last month that receiving the award was "a bloody disaster" because it shifted her attention away from writing. "All I do is give interviews and spend time being photographed," she said.

Saturday, May 31, 2008

Words for Beginning Writers by Glenda Beall



Persistence plus Patience equals Publication

Some of us send out poems on a regular basis, keeping something in the mail at all times. I know of more than one writer or poet who uses the rule of twelve. Keep twelve submissions out at all times. By doing this you are almost assured that one of them will be accepted.

When you receive a rejection, don’t assume that poem or story is no good. Choose carefully another market and submit your work immediately. Don’t let it spend the night at your house. Send it right away.Whether submitting online or via paper, be sure to include your full name, address, phone number and email address. Make it as easy as possible for the editor to contact you.

If you send a cover letter, make it brief. Most editors are not as impressed with where you have published, but want to be impressed with your writing. Scott Douglas of Main Street Rag doesn’t want any references as to where you have been published. He wants to judge your work, not your references.
Follow guidelines explicitly and know your market’s preferences. Check their website for the latest information such as the name of the present editor. If you don’t know the name of the editor, you aren’t very familiar with the magazine.

Editors cringe when they receive poetry written in elaborate fonts, on colored paper or decorated with butterflies and angels. Some editors are turned off before they read the poetry because the envelope has a return address label bearing photos of cute animals, flowers, and cherubs. Make your envelope and the work inside look professionally prepared. You are dealing with a business and they want to know you are a professional at what you do.

Don’t send anything until you have edited for spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Let another pair of trusted eyes read to check for errors. Send three to five poems because the editor wants to see the range of your work. I once sent a poem about a dog to a publication asking for poems about dogs. The problem was, I only had one poem about a dog so I only sent that poem. The editor wrote a nice note on my rejection slip. “I’m sure you must have more poems than this one. Send me more and I will consider your work.”

The hardest part of publishing for beginning writers is the waiting. We submit and two weeks later we expect to hear something. We want to know if it is accepted or if it is not. Just let us know so we can celebrate or send that batch of poems out again. But publishing doesn’t work that way. We must be patient. I found the best way is to continue writing or sending more submissions and forget that you have work out there. It can take months. Most publications will say in the guidelines the approximate time you can expect a reply. However, you can not be sure of that, either. If you wait what you think is a considerate amount of time and hear nothing, then by all means call or write and ask the status of your piece. Above all, be polite when you call. Editors are swamped with submissions these days and the manuscripts pile up. Your getting angry and being rude does nothing to help you and could hurt you in future endeavors not only with this editor but with other editors she knows. They talk.

Even after your work is accepted, it could be up to a year before the work is published. Until you see it on a printed page in a book or magazine, you still cannot be sure it will be published. One of my essays was accepted by a magazine and I worked with the editor to make changes, but my story did not come out in the next issue. Three month later it still had not been published. My essay was kept for a year and it was never published. I received a note with a check for half what I’d been promised telling me the magazine was going in another direction and could not use my work after all.

Anyone can become a published writer at anytime whether in a newsletter, newspaper, online on a blog, or in a self-published book. To be published all you have to do is make your work available to the public. But if your goal is to be published in successful magazines or journals, you must read to find your market. Researching markets is the least favorite thing for most writers. When you find, through the Writers’ Market or other directories, the type of publication that prints your kind of material, you should send only your best work and be sure to follow the guidelines which you can usually find on their website.

No matter how many rejections you receive, don’t give up. Persistence is the key. What one editor rejects, another might find to be the perfect poem or story for his next issue. But he won’t find it if it is lying buried in a drawer in your office. Keep submitting, and be patient. The more rejection slips you receive the closer you are to being accepted. And while you keep your work out there looking for a home, continue to write, write, write.
Glenda Beall is a writer and poet. Her poems and essays can be found in numerous journals and anthologies. Her articles in several newspapers. She also teaches writing and serves as the Program Coordinator for Netwest.

Wednesday, May 28, 2008

An Interview with Poet, Nancy Simpson, Resident Writer at John Campbell Folk School


Recently, I had the opportunity to interview poet, Nancy Simpson, former Program Coordinator for the North Carolina Writers' Network West. Although I’ve known Nancy for thirteen years and always admired her, I had some questions about her writing and NCWN West. As you will see, her answers are most informative as well as candid.

GB: Nancy, you have been a practicing poet for thirty years. What inspired you to be a poet?

NS: As it happened, the
N.C. Arts Council in Raleigh sent some poets to read at the Moss Memorial Library in Hayesville. I remember there was also a local poet on the program, Janice Townley Moore. Before that night I had only written rhyming poems. When I heard those poets read free verse poems, it changed my life forever. Something clicked. I remember thinking, Oh. That is what I have heard in my head all these years. I came to believe that poetry is a slanted way of seeing the world. When those quirky thoughts came, I started writing them down. That is how it began. I started studying free verse poetry immediately. I took classes with Dr. Steve Harvey, and I consider him my beloved teacher and mentor. I traveled far and wide to every writing workshop I could find. I went to hear every poet I could. I bought and listened to the great poets on tape. I could not get enough. Now, after all these years, I still can't get enough. Practicing, studying, and teaching poetry is my life.

GB: You earned your MFA at Warren Wilson College. Was that before you became Program Coordinator for NCWN West?

NS: I earned my M.F.A. in Writing in 1983. I began working with Marsha Warren, then Executive Director of the North Carolina Writers’ Network, to establish N.C.W.N. West in 1991.

GB: Early in your writing career you published with the best journals such as the Georgia Review and Prairie Schooner. How often has the Georgia Review chosen your poems, and what other fine journals published your work?

NS: I had three poems in The Georgia Review when Stan Lindberg was editor. I had five Poems in Prairie Schooner. Other poems were published in four editions of Southern Poetry Review, and recently SPR chose to reprint "Grass" in their upcoming 50th Anniversary Issue. Some of my poems have been in Indiana Review, Florida Review, Seneca Review and New Virginia Review. I've also been pleased to have poems in Appalachian Journal, Appalachian Heritage and Journal of Kentucky Studies.

GB: I know several of your poems have been chosen for anthologies and reprinted in books.

NS: I had poems reprinted in four editions of Anthology of Magazine Verse, Writers Choice, and Word and Wisdom - 100 Years of N.C. Poetry. My poem "Night Student" has been published and reprinted, upon request, nine times. It was recently included in Literary Trails of N.C. Seven poems were reprinted in the new anthology of Appalachian Poetry from McFarland Press.A new poem, "Carolina Blue Birds" is included in the anthology, The Poet's Guide to the Birds, forthcoming in 2008 from Anhinga Press.

GB: You published Across Water, a poetry chapbook and a full length collection, Night Student. Tell how that came about.

NS: The editor and publisher of State Street Press, Judith Kitchen, asked me if she could choose some of my poems for a chapbook manuscript. I had just met her in the M.F.A. Program at Warren Wilson College. I didn't know she owned a press. She chose and arranged the poems and published Across Water.
Two years later Judith Kitchen asked to see my manuscript again. After reading it, she called and said she had the title -- Night Student--and that although State Street Press published only chapbooks, she intended to publish my full-length collection. I was fortunate. I was very happy. To me, it is amazing. As years passed, Judith Kitchen became a dear friend. The biggest honor is that she asked me to be her best woman at her marriage ceremony.

GB: You dedicated many years to the NCWN West and, as Program Coordinator, mentored writers here in the mountains. Many have gone on to publish their work. However you continued publishing your own poems in literary journals, and you edited Lights in the Mountains, the NCWN West anthology published in 2005. How did you find the time when you also held a full-time job as a public school teacher?

NS: True. I taught in Clay County public schools for 26 years. After I earned my MFA, I taught 11th grade English and I taught English Composition part time at Tri County College. Later I switched to Continuing Ed so I could teach creative writing. At the same time, I co- founded N.C. Writers Network West and took on the job of Program Coordinator. I then was asked to serve as Resident Writer at John C. Campbell Folk School. At one time I was teaching full time and had three paying part-time writing related jobs. At the same time, I kept writing poems. I kept submitting them and getting them published. I do not know how I did it. It was not hard. Writing consumed my life.

GB: In recent years you lost a sister and a son. How has your writing helped you deal with your grief?

NS: I believe practicing poetry is a way to learn how to live. Yes, writing helped me deal with death and grief. Losing my sister was hard because we were close and most of my life she lived near enough that we could talk every day. She prodded me to write a specific historical novel and, before her death, she handed over all of her research. Every day I look across the driveway at her empty house. At night, it seems darker on the mountain without lights in her house. I honor her best by writing the novel. Sometimes when I get stuck, I imagine her telling me where to find the answer on which page of her research. Sometimes I imagine her saying, “Only 127 pages! Get to work!”

The death of my son from Cancer last summer was the hardest thing I've ever had to face. I was with him through surgery which took place during Christmas week at Emory Hospital in Atlanta. I thought he soon would be coming home, but his progress stalled and he stayed in the hospital. His brothers, who live in Atlanta, promised to take good care of him. One was employed as a nurse at Emory and checked on him often. I talked with my son two or three times a day, but grief set in. I became depressed. I had two completed poetry manuscripts that were circulating among the poetry presses, but I did not think about that very much. One day I found myself shuffling the manuscript pages, shifting poems from one manuscript to another, changing page numbers, even changing the title of one of the manuscripts. When I told a good friend what I was doing she said, “Oh No. Don't do that.”
I know she was concerned that in my depressed state, I might ruin the manuscripts. I stopped and thought about it. I knew I was doing the right thing. Other than the life of my son, there was nothing that could keep my mind focused. There was nothing else thatmade me want to get out of bed in the morning. Your question is how has my writing helped me deal with grief? Practicing poetry at the most dreadful time sustained me. When my son came home to Hospice, I put my poems away. I did not need them because I had my son, and I had an important new job to learn - how to be his nurse.

GB: As Writer in Residence at the John C. Campbell Folk School, you are in contact with writers and teachers all over the United States. What do you look for in choosing faculty for the Writing Program at JCCFS?

NS: In the
John C. Campbell Folk School Writing Program, I look for a writer who has book publications or is widely published in good magazines. Second, I want someone who has teaching credentials, who has taught writing before or has teacher training somewhere in their background. Third, and most important, the instructors who come to teach at JCCFS must fit into the non competitive environment. We have "no hierarchy and no lowerarchy." The best teachers can sit in a circle with their students and teach them well. Lectures go over like a lead balloon at the folk school. We now have a lovely set up with classes held in the living room of Orchard House and in the new writing studio which is attached to Orchard House. I will not say the teaching style we want is casual. No. A week at the folk school is the most intense kind of learning. But, it is not similar in any way to college classroom and never shall be. We only have 18 writing classes a year now and the schedule is filled through 2009. Still, I am always on the look out for good writing instructors.

GB: You have two new poetry manuscripts finished. Give us the names of each and tell us the themes of these works. Have any of the poems in these manuscripts already been published?

NS: One is LIVING ABOVE THE FROST LINE. The other is INTO THE HEART OF THE GLACIER.The poems were written over many years. I took a NCWN Advanced Poetry Class with Kathryn Stripling Byer. What she read was one manuscript with 150 poems. Kay said it should be two different manuscripts, and she advised where to break them apart. I will always appreciate her direction. LIVING ABOVE THE FROST LINE, which was first titled Accounting, is written in the voice of a woman who lives alone on a remote mountain in Appalachia. Her concerns focus on specific values: Worth of Persons, Family and Concern for our planet. Nineteen of the poems have been published.INTO THE HEART OF THE GLACIER is also written with the same southern voice of a woman living alone on a mountain. Glacier is a love story, the ancient Eurydice story turned backward and set in our time. Twenty-two of the poems have been published.

GB: On June 7, you will teach your first poetry workshop for NCWN West. You have taught at Tri-County Community College, John C. Campbell Folk School, and the Institute of Continuing Learning at Young Harris College. How did it happen that you never taught a class for NCWN West?

NS: Thanks for inviting me. I can hardly wait to teach this Netwest Saturday Poetry workshop on June 7. To answer the question, I was the Program Coordinator and my main job was to help the representatives in each county get the kind of writing programs they wanted. At that time
NCWN sponsored four Saturday workshops a year in the Netwest region. I was eager to teach, but it would not have been ethical to do so at the time I was on the NCWN payroll. I was busy editing and producing an anthology. Each county had character and ideas of its own. I worked hard at setting up critique groups, if that was what they wanted, or Saturday writing workshops. I was busy keeping two Netwest representatives in each county. It would not have been appropriate for me to teach a Netwest workshop.

I am happy to say that over the years, NCWN invited me to be on their Fall Conference program three different times. NC Women Writers invited me twice to be on their program; once when held in Asheville, and later when held in Greensboro. You can see I stayed busy, but now, yes now, I can say I am a happy woman to be invited to teach a Saturday Poetry Workshop for NCWN West.

GB: .What do you expect students to take away from this coming class, Advance Your Poetry?

NS: ADVANCE YOUR POETRY is an all day workshop for practicing free verse poets. My goal is to focus on their poetry and their poetry writing process. We will talk about how they started writing poetry, where they are now in their writing careerand what is their next step, and the next, and the next. I expect the students to take away direction and a folder marked in bold letters: MY POETRY CHAPBOOK COLLECTION.

GB: Nancy, I’m delighted you took the time to answer my questions so our visitors on
http://www.netwestwriters.blogspot.com/ can know more about you and about NCWN West.

NS: Glenda, thank you for asking.

Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Well Blow the Tannery Whistle!!

Gary Carden's performance this past Friday night at the PAC was amazing!! He told his story of the Tannery Whistle, a wonderful tale that unfolds like a huge black snake on hot pavement, full of crazy characters and hilarious anecdotes. Gary's stories link together so seamlessly that it is impossible to detect where fact leaves off and fiction begins. And that's the fun of a Gary Carden story, his rare ability to take events from his life and embellish them with wit and insight until they sparkle like a North Carolina stream!

The Performing Arts Center was packed. I was glad to see so many people take advantage of coming out to hear one of the funniest and most gifted storytellers around, as well as one of this area's most prized treasures! Everyone laughed so hard, that when Gary finished, there was not a dry eye in the house. If you haven't heard Gary Carden tell a story, you are missing out on an extraordinary experience. He is a natural teller and delightful humorist. I hope to see more of him on stage soon!

Lonnie Busch